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Welcome to Pensapedia and thanks for your attempt to contribute to our project.  We're glad to have you.  May I ask, though, how does the [[Laura Sjoberg]] article you created relate to Pensacola?  Is she a Pensacola resident or was she born here?  The article does not make that clear.  I would ask that you revise the article to clarify, because at current it does not meet our [[Pensapedia:About|standards for inclusion]].  If you do not take steps to clarify the article's relation to Pensacola, it will likely face deletion.  Again, welcome to Pensapedia!  '''[[User:Dscosson|dscosson]]''' ··· '''[[User talk:Dcosson|talk]]''' 08:00, 14 March 2008 (CDT)
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:She's a Pensacola native. I think Laura was a couple years ahead of me at [[PHS]]. However, the connection to Pensacola should be stated explicitly in the article. Also, based on the username of the contributor, this article likely represents a [[Pensapedia:Conflict of interest|conflict of interest]]. I don't think we need to delete it, per se, but while I congratulate Laura on her successful career, the level of detail in the initial contribution is unnecessary and probably aggrandized.
 
 
 
:I've updated the article with what I believe is a reasonable compromise. Please post here if you have any objections.  --[[User:Admin|Admin]] 11:26, 14 March 2008 (CDT)
 

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